Here is the sentence again:

During the summer when a variety of fruit is in season, Melville always avoids the fresh peaches, the fuzzy skin brushing against his lips makes Melville think that he's eating a small rodent.

The comma between peaches and the creates a comma splice. Melville always avoids the fresh peaches is one complete sentence. The fuzzy skin brushing against his lips makes Melville think ... begins a second complete sentence.

To fix this problem, you could put a period after peaches and capitalize the T for the.

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