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Ralph spent all his savings on a diamond ring to give to his girlfriend Gloria. A greedy young woman who had a box full of expensive trinkets from ex-boyfriends. Gloria was always looking for a man with a fat wallet.

The second part is an appositive fragment. All you have here is a noun phrase renaming Gloria. This phrase does not have a main clause, the necessary component of all complete sentences.

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