Here is the original item:
Dressing for her interview with the
recruiters,
(A) Leisha
debated wearing four hoops in each ear and a nose
ring (B)
or removing the jewelry
(C) and tolerating
convention during the college job fair.
You wanted to do this:
Dressing for her interview with the recruiters Leisha
debated wearing four hoops in each ear and a nose ring or removing the jewelry
and tolerating convention during the college job fair.
Removing the comma after recruiters is an error. Dressing for her interview with the recruiters is a participle phrase. When this type of phrase introduces a main clause, you need a comma to connect the two parts.
You might want to review the rules.